Thank you for the memories

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midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

0 posted 2003-05-03 12:16 PM

Is it you
Is it me
Is it true
Is it we

Is it chance
Is it fate
Is it love
Is it too late

Was I stupid
Was I a fool
Was I dumb
Was I cruel

Were you wacky
Were you crazed
Were you senseless
Were you dazed

Did you know
That I couldn’t wait
Because of you
I was losing weight

I was sick
I felt tired
I gave up
All my desires

Promise me
You won’t regret
You gave me up
So don’t look back

Thank you for the memories
All the times you’ve touched me
I’ll always look back and smile
And fondly reminisce

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I wrote this as I recalled waiting and pining for a person who didn't love me...

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-05-03 02:21 PM

Michelle~
I enjoyed the flow of this piece~

*smiling* gently at your ending statement ...~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

2 posted 2003-05-04 03:41 AM

Dear Marge,

Thank you for ur sweet reply ^_^

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-05-26 03:35 AM

know this well, too well

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2003-05-27 06:30 AM

when all is said and done, what's left is the memories huh?

you know, sometimes i'm a bit greedy and just can't be satisfied with memories...i wanna more, more....

but i must say kudos to you for being able to look back in fondness and not with bitterness or other negative feelings...i don't think i can do that yet

write on!

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

5 posted 2003-05-29 06:34 PM

this is lovely and sad but all wrapped up. i liked it very much.
hugs from june x

peaceful_dreamer
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

6 posted 2003-05-30 09:03 PM

wow...i really like this. it flows so nicely and it has a lot of meaning! nicely done!

there are 2 ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it. -unknown

SwEeTnSeXy18
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 247
nc

7 posted 2003-05-31 11:08 PM

Midnightblues:

I love your quote, and I agree with it. In your poem you can feel your sadness and the many questions that go through most peoples heads when something like this happens, whos fault it is, what could have been done diffrent, and what to happen next. I wish I had the answer for you but I dont, I can only say that you shouldnt give up hope for the one who is right for you, who will love you. Take care

Lisa

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

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