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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
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0 posted 2003-04-29 07:28 PM


Puppy's Dream

Watch your step my dear puppy.
You think you are on high
Climbing the tree away from me,
But when you look up the sky
Trying to catch the moon,
Only to find the moon is too far away,
Falling down on the ground with a sob.

Watch your step my dear puppy.
Can you lend me an ear tonight?
I walked around for twenty years,
But I couldn't identify my footprints.
I studied around for twenty years,
Yet I still don't know what's right.
Puppy tells me I am not far away-
    From the light.

I hope I can be carefree from the moon.
The moon is but a fantasy, of a trick.
People say catch, catch the moon,
I say catch, catch my breath.
Breathing with the flowers near,
Observing the moon from down below,
A better day I have than touching the moon.

But I'm not carefree from the moon.
Once a while I will want to fly
To the moon and sit on the cloud,
To hear the wind sing in ensemble
And the sky to change its hue as my hat.
Once a while I will have feet off the ground,
And fly to mysterious land of dreams.

(c)April 29, 2003
Eliza Simmons


Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (04-30-2003 01:40 PM).]

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midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
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1 posted 2003-04-30 07:02 AM


Dear Eliza,

another wonderful piece! hope u reach ur dreams one day, and maybe then u'll lemme cuddle ur puppy for a day? hehe ^_^

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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2 posted 2003-04-30 03:44 PM


Eliza:  Interesting poem and thanks for sending it to me.  I thought I'd answer here.

Betty Lou Hebert

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