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wings of the moon
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0 posted 2003-04-29 05:08 PM



chasing me,
     day after day
a middle class letter
     haunts me to stay

Am I obsessed?

that cannot be,

for i run after it,
     nuit after nuit.

Adventurous promises
     make my feelings sway
but I know
     that giving in....

     my shell exists no more
Yet,
     I refuse to draw....

I do not want this!
but I do....

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

© Copyright 2003 Claire Lucille - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-29 05:22 PM


This is very mysterious to me, but something about the letter L?  Joyce
wings of the moon
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2 posted 2003-04-29 05:25 PM


oh all right, I'll give you a clue...
think of words starting with that letter...
more particularly a certain word that seems so easy to say but isn't...
Thank you for your input

aries_luv_ppl
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3 posted 2003-04-29 06:43 PM


this is a lovely piece. Your poetry is rather unqiue.

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

wings of the moon
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4 posted 2003-04-30 04:44 AM


Thank you eliza for your sweet words,
love,
Claire

midnightblues
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5 posted 2003-04-30 06:55 AM


Its 'Love' right? Cute poem, cute poet....hehehe

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

wings of the moon
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6 posted 2003-04-30 07:01 AM


Michelle, you guessed right
Thank you for your comments

love,
Claire x

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

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