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Wikket
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0 posted 2003-04-29 02:41 PM



Who is that I see,
Standing next to me,
In the white light of Spring,
and the shadow of Love?

You are the gentle one,
As bright as the morning sun,
Joined by our streams of life
and happpiness is ours.

Awake from my dream...
Please, love, be there.

"...Two roads diverged in a wood, and I--took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference." --Robert Frost

© Copyright 2003 Jamie Carlson - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-04-29 05:25 PM


I hope so too.  This is lovely.  Joyce
junemac
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2 posted 2003-04-29 05:51 PM


hope that special one is there, i thoroughly enjoyed this one.
hugs from june x

aries_luv_ppl
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3 posted 2003-04-29 06:47 PM


nice

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

midnightblues
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4 posted 2003-04-30 06:56 AM


Dear Jamie,

this is very pretty ^_^

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Justbleu
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5 posted 2003-04-30 12:41 PM


This is a very nice piece....
Enjoyed!!!!
And I love your signature.  It's from my favorite poem from Robert Frost!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


peaceful_dreamer
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6 posted 2003-04-30 10:09 PM


beautiful piece. i really enjoyed reading it.


leighsa
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7 posted 2003-05-01 12:22 PM


Very Nice
Ashgiel


garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-05-01 05:13 AM


This is a really pretty poem.
I enjoyed reading it.
Hugs,
Ethel

Wikket
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9 posted 2003-05-01 03:52 PM


Thank you everyone for commenting.  It has been a long while since I last posted at the Pub, and you've all given me a great Welcome Back!  Thanks again everyone for your comments!!! --Jamie

"...Two roads diverged in a wood, and I--took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference." --Robert Frost

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