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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-04-28 02:39 AM


Mysterious Eyes and Tender Moon

Mysterious green eyes of yours,
Look around in the dark,
Can't find anything to lay your fine green eyes.
A beam of light suddenly shine upon your head.
You cautiously step back and lie down on your back.

"Be quiet, it's the moon,
Who has come to visit your fine eyes.
Don't be afraid.
She is here to caress your hair
And gives you good sleep."

Laying beside the road,
You gaze at the benign moonshine
To find she is smiling
And reaching out from the sky above
To you down on earth.

And you soon find out,
That she has been waiting this way
Night after night sitting on her side bed,
Watching you with her eyes open awake,
Just to see you safe
Sleeping in on the road.

Side note: This is a poem about a cat sleeping under moonlight. The moon is like the cat's mother, always watching, reaching out for her.

(c)April 27, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-04-28 08:17 AM


OhEliza~
How 'mysteriously' unique~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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midnightblues
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2 posted 2003-04-28 10:47 AM


Dear Eliza,

I love poems that tell of stories!!!

Love
Michelle

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3 posted 2003-04-29 04:47 PM


Eliza:  Interesting poem and I enjoyed it!

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2003-04-29 05:12 PM


wow, this is a truly beautiful write

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

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5 posted 2003-04-29 05:24 PM


I am glad ylu explained that it wasn't little Eliza lying by the road.  Joyce
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