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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-04-24 05:07 PM


Sitting on the Bench

Sitting on the bench,
I look up to the sky,
From my sandwich box.

Thinking today would be another day
Of sunshine and clear blue,
But the rain comes in
And blows all things away.

All things except my mood.
Sometimes I miss the white clouds
Hiding behind the brillant sun.
Sometimes I think I would miss you,
But when the wind blows my way,
It blows you away from my brain.

©April 24, 2003
Eliza Simmons


Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.


[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (04-24-2003 07:42 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-04-24 07:02 PM


Sorry about that.  Joyce
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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2 posted 2003-04-25 03:18 PM


Dear Eliza,

sometimes I come across poems that express MY sentiments, and yours are often those. its kinda nostalgic feeling, i hope things work out for u, and I LOVE THIS POEM!

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

SPIRIT
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3 posted 2003-04-25 07:09 PM


Another nice write, but isn't it time for some 'happy' writing?  Good!!!!!!
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