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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2003-04-20 06:28 PM


The greening of Spring
lacy gowns adorn her boughs
crown of Hope her gift

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-04-20 09:22 PM


You say so much in your 17 words.  Lovely, Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (04-22-2003 07:25 PM).]

Songbird
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2 posted 2003-04-22 12:23 PM


Yes, every word of it!
SPIRIT
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3 posted 2003-04-22 01:36 AM


Quality as always in so few words. Lovely.
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4 posted 2003-04-22 06:19 PM


Ellie~

Such beautiful words
Gifting of sweetest adorn
Celebrate, poet~


YOU are LOVELY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2003-04-22 07:27 PM


I just re-read my answer to you.  I wonder where my words went.  I have fixed it.  Love, Joyce
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