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lorenlynn
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since 2003-01-27
Posts 203
California Beaches

0 posted 2003-04-19 03:00 AM




Oh!
How fierce the wind cries.
How I have lost!
They have  all gone away.
Am I so different that I do not feel?
My heart aches for their laughter.
So empty the night is,
Knowing that you have forgotten.
My friends I treasure you ,
Hold you deep within.
I wish you would unlock your doors,
Invite me in.
Remember me,
Love me as you said you did...


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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
1 posted 2003-04-19 08:38 AM


Wow! Nice! I'm impressed. I haven't forgotten you - and I still 'luvs yer' loads my dear friend. Things will get better - I promise.
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
2 posted 2003-04-19 12:18 PM


You've fou d the key to this door with your plaintive plea.  Open it often.  Love, Joyce
lorenlynn
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since 2003-01-27
Posts 203
California Beaches
3 posted 2003-04-19 08:23 PM


Thank You!
Flower
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since 2003-03-15
Posts 240
California
4 posted 2003-04-19 08:34 PM


Very heart wrenching, sad but certainly gets the point across.
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