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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-04-18 10:30 PM


Intertwine

I heard you love singing
And today I'm going to sing you a song.
A song without wits,
But each word is true to the heart.
I long to say I love you
Without knowing the right way,
Til I wrote this song for you and me.

Baby, would you be my girl
If I sing this song over a thousand times?
Baby would you believe in me,
If tonight I reveal my tender love?
One thing I do know is that
I will sing this song
Until my lips dry like withered leaves,
Falling to the ground.
This song will only end
When it intertwines in your heart.

Side note: I wish someday my lover sing this song to me.

(c)April 18, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.


[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (04-18-2003 10:32 PM).]

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SPIRIT
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1 posted 2003-04-18 10:57 PM


Maybe one day he will - when the time is right.
rcl 4eva
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2 posted 2003-04-18 11:06 PM


Awww!!!! I hope he sings it for you
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-04-19 04:33 PM


Eliza~
You're such a lovely romantic~
*huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 2003-04-19 06:17 PM


Be patient my Eliza.  Joyce
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