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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2003-04-18 06:00 PM


(The challenge was to use all these words.My girls;yee-ha; 10 and 2; cool ranch doritos;country girl;you ain't seen nothing yet;sweep me off my feet;grandfather's clock and rose or roses.)

Challenge

My girls and I meet once a week;
Each Tuesday between 10 and 2.
We are good friends with simple lives,
The bonds among us strong and true.
We sit and gossip just a bit
And listen to the other's woes.
Our lunch is usually potluck,
Some bringing Cool Ranch Doritos.

I am the only country girl
And married to my own cowboy.
He likes to sweep me off my feet
And shout "Yee Ha".He is my joy.
His grammar's not all it should be.
He says, "You ain't seen nothing yet."
But when I brag about my man,
Those girls are jealous, you can bet.

He often brings me in a rose,
Picked from my own small garden patch.
He bows and gives it with such dash,
You'd get the giggles, just to watch.
Helen's grandfather's clock strikes two.
The party's over, time to go.
In one more week we'll all be back
To tell of chatty news we know.

by Joyce 4/18/03


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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
1 posted 2003-04-18 06:10 PM


Brilliant Joyce - I love it - loads of fun.
aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
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Universal Mind
2 posted 2003-04-18 10:24 PM


brilliant as spirit has said

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2003-04-18 11:11 PM


Oh How I enjoyed....
This is really a fun one....with the girls.
You did wonderfully.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


rcl 4eva
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since 2003-04-12
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4 posted 2003-04-18 11:11 PM


Just beautiful!
Flower
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since 2003-03-15
Posts 240
California
5 posted 2003-04-19 08:39 PM


What a great write, the challenge appears to be very well met.
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