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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-04-07 11:34 PM


The sky is gray,
The floor is white,
And empty sky and spacious field.
But do I have to dwell on them?
Do I have to, then,
Paint an empty sky?
My brush isn't for gray.
It isn't for white.
It is for the color my umberalla:
Red leaves, Orange shines,
Yellow lights, Green lizards,
Blue ocean, Purple sunset.
When my umberalla is turning,
It becomes white; white shade of united.

Side Note: At sad time, we need to paint even more cheerful pictures.

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-08 10:01 AM


Yes, I think that God meant for the world to be a mulitude of colours Eliza. Good read this morning! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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2 posted 2003-04-08 06:26 PM


Eliza:  Good poem!  We can always inject color into our lives, even when the times are sad!  

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2003-04-09 02:33 PM


Eliza~
You hold a full palette of beautiful colors, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2003-04-09 07:01 PM


We all have the blessing of beautiful colors if we elect to make the best use of them. Nice poetry from your pen.   Joyce
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