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lorenlynn
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California Beaches

0 posted 2003-04-04 09:26 PM



When is enough?
Filling a hole,
That continues to remain empty.
Holding on with the dreaded fear
Of disaster!
The fall,
When you hit the ground.
The nightmare that never wakes.
When does it end?
Live day to day,
The sun is out,
Completly absorbed in darkness,
That no one but you see.

When is enough?

Wisdom comes with winters. **  Oscar Wilde.

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-04-04 10:45 PM


I hope this is not your real state.  Well written and chilling.  Joyce
SPIRIT
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California Desert
2 posted 2003-04-04 11:42 PM


Pretty deep stuff here! As usual an interesting write from you.
Flower
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since 2003-03-15
Posts 240
California
3 posted 2003-04-05 03:35 PM


So just when is enough enough?  I never figured it out. Quite an interesting piece this.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-04-05 05:26 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Only God knows the answer I'm sure, my heart sends many angel hugs out to you and hope now you have healed! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

lorenlynn
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since 2003-01-27
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California Beaches
5 posted 2003-04-05 11:29 PM



Thank you! I feel much better now , I guess we all have our bad days

lorenlynn
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California Beaches
6 posted 2003-04-05 11:30 PM


  
carol
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Florida USA
7 posted 2003-04-18 12:00 PM


Very sad but it is well done it gets my vote

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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