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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-04-02 02:08 PM


Don't Hold On To My Words

Sweet words are fairy tales
Once happened in ancient times.
Sweet words are my lies...

Don't wait late at night
To hear my "Goodnight",
For I will never phone.

Yesterday was bright;
Everything seemed be fine
When we sit up on the Mount.

But all I ever needed
Was a company
Who would listen to my soul.

I was never meant
To take you for grant,
Never meant to hurt your heart.

I would cast away your tears
Only I am not the one,
The one that holds you forever.

It was a wrong start.
I can lie no longer,
I can't hurt you further.

Sweet words are fairy tales
Once happened in ancient times.
Sweet words are my lies...

(c)April 2, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Side note: Sometimes ago, I wrote "I'm a Hamster" but didn't get much feedback. Chris says my meaning isn't clear....so here is what I meant by that poem.

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-04-02 02:40 PM


Eliza~

'Sweet words are fairy tales
Once happened in ancient times.
Sweet words are my lies...'


Nothing as lovely as your thoughts could EVER be 'lies'~

You've such a creatively magical imagination~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2003-04-02 03:26 PM


Eliza - this is from your heart and understood fully. Well done. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 2003-04-02 06:50 PM


Yes this is very clear and lovely.  Joyce
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