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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-04-01 01:53 PM

If you ask me why
Some write better or else.
I will smile at you
And tell you a secret.

Those write well
Are those who pour out
Their feelings and time
Into words and pictures.

Those write well
Don't neccessary is the brightest,
What they got
Is a pure, a sincere heart.

That they want to help,
Want to share,
Love to call up others,
Interest in all things.

It doesn't matter if
It's a little rock,
Or a big big tree,
They have endless stories.

And when I look around
I see many beautiful hearts
Fortunate for me
I can slightly be touched
By each of you and form my own.

You all have opened my eyes...

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-04-01 02:19 PM

Aww, that's lovely Liza. Yes, we all can learn something from each other's writing can't we? Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-04-01 06:02 PM

Eliza~
Amen to that, young lady !

And YOU touch me greatly with your writing~

The answer to your question in my e-mail is -

gen·u·flect [ jénny flèkt ] (past gen·u·flect·ed, past participle gen·u·flect·ed, present participle gen·u·flect·ing, 3rd person present singular gen·u·flects)
intransitive verb

1. kneel- to bend the right knee to the floor and rise again as a gesture of religious respect, particularly in a Roman Catholic or Anglican church

2. show excessive respect- to show undeserved or unnecessarily deferential respect for somebody or something

*I thought of the sun as presenting the gesture of 'genuflecting' to the oncoming night~

Thank you for asking~

You're a very gifted poetess~
For to write from the heart is all that is necessary~
*Huglets:
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2003-04-01 06:43 PM

Eliza: You have a lovely way of expressing yourself and your feelings. Enjoyed this!

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2003-04-01 07:19 PM

How dear of you to say so, sweet Eliza. Love, Joyce

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