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Wesley the Blue
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0 posted 2003-03-28 05:35 AM


Life spins around
As I stand in the middle
Where the heart abides

Only a spectator
Never to participate
Where the heart abides

Everything is a blur
Things that were, or might have been
Where the heart abides

Etheric, untouchable
Life spins around
As I stand in the middle
Where the heart abides in solitude

© Copyright 2003 Keith W. Mullin - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-03-28 12:37 PM


I can certainly relate to you here...I have settled into that place too myself
Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2003-03-28 03:12 PM


It's just moving too fast.  Nice words.  Joyce
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3 posted 2003-03-28 05:02 PM


Great post
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2003-03-28 07:44 PM


Keith~
Love the title ... and your poetic treatment~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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MissKlarmic
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5 posted 2003-03-29 08:17 PM


you have a talented way with words , i cannot put my finger on exactly what sets you apart but its fantastic keep up the good work!
Wesley the Blue
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6 posted 2003-03-30 06:59 PM


Thank you all for your kind comments.

"The usefulness of a cup is in its emptiness, for a cup that is full can hold no more."
-Roy Suenaka

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