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Street Heart
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0 posted 2003-03-26 08:10 PM


Forever...
   and so it goes...
      like the darkened Eve of Never
         on the day that passes by
And light will dim through gauzes
   like a blindness that forsakes
      the ever flowing ribbons
         ever stretching on through time

Together...
   and so we go...
      and the dark deceiving fetters
         all will fall along the way
And light will shine much brighter
   as our kindness overtakes
      the ever blinding battles
         ever stretching on through time


March 26,2oo3


If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living.

Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963

[This message has been edited by Street Heart (03-26-2003 08:12 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-03-26 09:49 PM


Yes let us hope that kindness overtakes.  Worthy of my vote.  Joyce
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2 posted 2003-03-26 11:53 PM




(big hugggsssssss) And I believe for one to truly understand this with utmost heart, one must feel the pain in order to feel compassion for others! (sad sigh) I wish it wasn't as hard to realize this central truth but I think that is what creates kindness and appreciation to it, my prayers are with all the world, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Geoffrey, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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3 posted 2003-03-27 10:02 AM


Another insightful write. I admire your writing and I voted.
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4 posted 2003-03-27 12:27 PM


Quite influenced by the present war, I see, with ribbons and battles. I like how love wins out in this one, though.
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5 posted 2003-03-27 12:37 PM


Very well done...much enjoyed the read as I do all you write.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2003-03-27 07:06 PM


StreetHeart--I like the circular feeling to this...as mankind does again what he did before and back again.  
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7 posted 2003-04-07 01:01 AM


Just popped in
To bumpity bump.


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8 posted 2003-04-09 12:06 PM


StreetHeart~
A remarkable piece.
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2003-04-10 06:45 AM


Enjoy your writing....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Street Heart
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10 posted 2003-04-10 09:51 AM


Thank you all for your responses.I was just sitting here at the 'puter,the day after my B-day,and this just popped in my head.It started as a rhythm and then flowed out pretty much as a lyric to a song.I can just make out the notes as I read it.Thanks again.

Peace On Earth,Geoffrey

If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living.

Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963

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11 posted 2003-04-15 01:48 PM



Ah, good, Geoffrey!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Flower
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12 posted 2003-04-16 10:38 AM


Very super write. I voted on this.
JP
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13 posted 2003-04-16 11:14 AM


nicely done, indeed.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

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14 posted 2003-04-29 04:45 AM


liked this
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15 posted 2003-04-29 05:35 PM


A wonderful write Geoffrey... as always m'friend.



Maree

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16 posted 2003-04-29 06:49 PM


Eliza Simmons
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17 posted 2003-04-30 05:16 PM


nice  write

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

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