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SPIRIT
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0 posted 2003-03-11 10:31 PM


MOODS

I hang,
Somewhat haphazardly
In the wardrobe
Of my mind
The clothing,
Of my many varied moods.

Thankfully,
Not appearing to fit,
Are the jackets of despair,
Emotional imbalance,
Despondency and fear,  
And other upheavals.
They are no longer needed.

The cloaks of selfishness,
Jealousy, impatience and anger,
Are frayed around the edges.
But they are becoming non-existent,
Of little importance.

I wear the hat
Of thankfulness,
Jauntily, upon my head.
Dressed accordingly
I am aware
Of the many blessing
In my life - yesterday, today
And tomorrow,
That is yet to be.

Threadbare, well-worn,
Looking the worse for wear,
Are the dresses of joy,
Love and contentment.
Adorned in my tattered frocks,
The wardrobe, of my life,
Is full.



I be me BUT who does me be?


© Copyright 2003 das - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-03-11 10:46 PM


Excellent!!

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Midnitesun
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2 posted 2003-03-11 11:09 PM


I love the way you clean out your closet!
Yes, a vey cool post.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-03-11 11:46 PM




(sigh) Every day there is a whole new and appropriate attire for us to embrace the day with, and each toga and suit and dress never runs out of fashion either! (big hugggsssssss) Above all may grace always be the strong suit in your heart, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Das, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

kaile
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4 posted 2003-03-12 12:03 PM


SPIRIT,
i was going to say that i have those suits unofficially labelled as "sad", "angry", "moody" and "happy" since i will usually wear them when that particular mood strikes. but reading on, this gave me a smile...a way cooler post than i expected....

i like the way how you write on a variety of topics....i seem to be able to write depressing musings and i'm trying to learn from you that hey, there are so many things that ought to be said...

sweetwater
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Perth
5 posted 2003-03-12 12:09 PM


wow.. I love this.. what an amazing way to look into your  'wardrobe'
Loren Lynn
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6 posted 2003-03-12 12:25 PM


Well Written, you have my vote!! I so can relate ,I must wear twenty hats a day!
garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-03-12 01:00 AM


I like the way you related feelings to clothes. Very good writing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-03-13 11:37 PM


I already voted...just a little bump to the front page...
Kethry
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9 posted 2003-03-14 05:20 AM


Talk about putting on the garments of praise... What a wonderful world it would be if everyone had closets like this.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Joyce Johnson
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10 posted 2003-03-14 04:28 PM


Sounds as though you're dressed to win.  Joyce
WhiteRose
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11 posted 2003-03-15 11:21 AM


Very nicely done, enjoyed the read.
SPIRIT
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12 posted 2003-03-16 10:57 AM


Thank you, all comments appreciated.
Flower
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13 posted 2003-03-17 01:11 PM


My wardrobe is so crammed don't have a clue what's in it. Liked and voted.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-03-17 01:21 PM


Oh, yes! I totally concur!

Wonderful poetic expression!

~ May all your dresses be of love, joy and contentment!---and look good as well! tehe

Springtime hugs,
EA

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