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bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand

0 posted 2003-03-17 09:37 PM



I care...
I love...
I give my heart.
My feelings...
My fears...
My hopes...
I share it all.
I listen...
I hold...
I touch...
But, it's never enough.
What did I do?
Or say?
Or not?
They leave & I know...
I can't stop it.


I know this is kind of unorganized, but basically it was just something I needed to say.

Best

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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2003-03-18 06:04 AM


This happens to me also...keep looking...James
aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
Universal Mind
2 posted 2003-03-18 11:42 AM


yes, keep looking...

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

Flower
Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240
California
3 posted 2003-03-18 02:57 PM


Unorganised? not really, that seems to be the reality of relationships and I really can relate to this.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
4 posted 2003-03-18 06:58 PM


James, Aries and Flower...

Thanks so much....
Just when you think you found the one...bam!
I just needed to vent...thanks for listening.

Best

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