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Tristan
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0 posted 2003-03-17 02:51 PM



when the sun sets, you seem to think about life.
are we the only life forms on this planet?

you think about life and what you've done.
if i was to go, would i be ready?
have i served my pupose?

you think about whats to come.
will i fall in love?
will my life be what i want?

you think about others.
how are the people in iraq?
how are our soldiers?

you think about your mistakes.
should i have said that white lie?
does he know i didn't mean to yell?

you think about your triumphs.
were they proud of me too?
should i be that proud about my self?

it's funny when the sun sets, what such a thing can do.
i'll try to be better tomorrow.

when the sun sets...

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-03-17 06:02 PM


As long as we have tomorrow.  Joyce
Tristan
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2 posted 2003-03-20 09:59 AM


especislly now that we're at war
rosepetals25
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3 posted 2003-03-20 07:18 PM


Very nice write, not enough people stop to think about whether they yelled or not.. more people should.  I liked

Tara

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4 posted 2003-03-21 10:19 AM


and when the sun sets, it always again arises...very well done...softly smiling here..

I must have had my momma's will
and Gods Amazing Grace...

I'm a survivor....
(Reba)

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Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-03-21 10:58 AM


Very nicely penned..and much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

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