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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-03-14 08:36 PM


Melt Away

It doesn't matter it's raining
Or the sun is shining.
The smell of you is so warm
That my whole body collapse
In front of you... (right there beside you)

It doesn't matter I'm hungry
Or my belly rises like a balloon.
The taste of you is so gentle
That I feel like it's a cushion
To my distress... (ease my belly)

I don't want a day without you.
You are water to my instinct.
My lip slowly touches you.
You warmly welcome me
Sitting on my tongue.

Each drop of your fine
Gentleness echoes within me.
You inspire my thoughts
As I spill them on ink,
As though I'm sharing... part of you.

(c)Mar 14, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-03-16 09:00 AM


Eliza~

'You inspire my thoughts
As I spill them on ink,'


An absolutely breathtaking thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2003-03-16 11:06 AM


Very poetic.  Joyce
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3 posted 2003-03-16 11:56 AM


Nice!
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