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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-03-14 05:42 PM


A whisper from computer
(You've got mail)
Puts my eyes into a sleepy spell.
I gaze at the screen,
Searching for you
To find a:

"I'm sorry,
my e-mail wasn't working.
I will write you
All my replies,
But I've to go to work."

Somehow this makes me smile.
At least he explains.
As long as he replies,
And allow me
To make him smile,
I am content
To be only his friend.

As long as you allow
Me to come to your mail
To say hi and I miss you,
I am happy to bless you.

"I'm sorry,
my e-mail wasn't working.
I will write you
All my replies,
But I've to go to work."

What a good message
To your friend,
To be keeping in touch
With them.

I don't know why
I'm still your friend.
Perhaps writing to you
Has become a habit.

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.


[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (03-14-2003 05:44 PM).]

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-03-14 06:27 PM


This is cute.  You've got mail, such a wonderful message.  Joyce
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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2003-03-15 05:49 PM


Eliza:  I enjoyed this and it's always nice to hear from an e-mail friend, even if it's only a forwarded message!

Betty Lou Hebert

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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3 posted 2003-03-16 11:54 AM


Nice write - enjoyed.
Tristan
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4 posted 2003-03-16 11:17 PM


this was great, i like to get mail, i mean love not like -- call me crazy
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