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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-03-12 08:18 PM


Resting With Heart Beats

Waves once stirred,
Now are calm as mild heart heart beats;
Sun once burnt,
Now gives out benign glow...
...Resting
With the heart beats.

Sky once was blue,
Now hues change the curtains of mind.
Wind once was deep to Earth,
Now flies underneath...
...Warm air.

(c)Mar 12, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

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1 posted 2003-03-13 07:18 PM


Eliza - this is a soft and colourful write. Easy to read - I like it! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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2 posted 2003-03-13 07:59 PM


Pleasant read, your pen is working overtime these days, lucky for us.
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3 posted 2003-03-13 08:37 PM


Eliza~
Again you stun me with phrases such as this -
'Now hues change the curtains of mind'

Sooooooooooooo original sweet poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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