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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-03-11 07:08 PM


Words Unspoken

The rain...is hiding her tears.
The birds...are singing with cries.
The sky...is covering by curtains.
The wind...is smoothing the day
...yet she reminds coldness.

Chilly rain from the heart,
Mournful cries of birds,
Black curtains of clouds,
Mild touches of wind,
...Nature is echoing with me.

Here I stand...among them-
Rain, birds, clouds, wind,
Only you can...understand...me.

//to put it in book or not?


~Every girl has a dream within.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (03-11-2003 07:09 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-03-11 07:45 PM


Very nice Eliza!! Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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2 posted 2003-03-12 05:56 PM


Eliza:  This is very well done. I like it as much as the ones you have already entered in the book, so why not go for it!!

Betty Lou Hebert

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