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Smells of Gloria Jean

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2003-03-10 05:27 PM

Just in case your wondering ( if you don't know ) Gloria Jean is coffee

steam rises,penatrating the skin
setting of a stream of high pitched voices
that live inside
its done, the black liquid that streams
out of a glass container
that can't contain it at all
its almost melting, the burns so intense
giving off the vibrant smell
old men smile as the waitress delievers
and picks up a spoon for each
they cheer as the world passes them by
from outside the window where a widow once stood
now the boy yet a man
crashes like thunder through the night
to see the waitress that is his
joined by the rings resting upon amber hands
and only the coffee can tide them by

Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you......

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2003-03-10 05:51 PM

Interesting write on the lure of coffee. Joyce

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-03-11 03:27 PM

Very nice...James

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

3 posted 2003-03-12 03:20 PM

nice read

~Every girl has a dream within.

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

4 posted 2003-03-13 02:41 PM

Nice! I enjoyed.

Street Heart
Member

since 2002-09-05

Posts 349
Pennsylvania,USA

5 posted 2003-03-13 06:10 PM

Wow,Riley,that was beautiful! You have quite a way with words.You created such vivid and thought-provoking imagery.I really like your style.I think you should definitely submit this for the "Reflections" book.I vote yes!
Looking forward to more from you.

Peace,Geoffrey

If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living.

Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963

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