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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-03-10 10:57 AM


Red Scarf Falling

Red scarf pulling down
From the virtuous moon,
Yellow beams of sun
Smile in approval.
Tonight kisses shall
Be our first together;
Tomorrow we shall
Have our first dawn.

Side note: In Chinese ancient wedding, the bride have a red scarf covering her face on wedding day, until the ceremony is done, and the couple is sent to their room, the scarf stay veiled. Then the gloom uncover it and share wine and have nice night.

(c)Mar 9, 2003
Eliza Simmons

~Every girl has a dream within.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-10 11:05 AM


Very interesting. Softly written. Enjoyed this. Chris

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that perches in the soul....
                  
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2 posted 2003-03-10 02:47 PM


Gently nice.
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3 posted 2003-03-10 03:00 PM


Eliza:  This is well done.  Nice story and interesting concept of the moon and sun, being wedded.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2003-03-10 04:12 PM


Enjoyed...James
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5 posted 2003-03-10 04:26 PM


Glad to have the info notes.  Well done.  Joyce
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6 posted 2003-03-10 04:56 PM


OhEliza~
This is stunning~

The title !!! .... oh, I love it~
Thank you for the notes on the custom~
How beautiful ... how very, very beautiful~

I have no doubt that someday you will look gorgeous in 'red scarf'~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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