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bestgirl911
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0 posted 2003-03-07 07:39 PM



I thought I would never see this place again, the journey here looked so different than before.

So bright, the sun so warm and friendly. I could hear the birds, they sounded closer than before.

The breeze gently blowing the hair from my face. It was all so reassuring and peaceful.

Then I took a wrong turn somewhere, and I am confused as to how i ended up here again.

To this old familiar place. I recognize it, although it looks different-yet the same.

It's a little overgrown, there are no birds singing here, it's ghostly quiet.

A cold breeze blows and I try to block myself from the chill, but it still goes through me.

No one here to keep me warm, it's been long since abandoned and lonely.

Just like I remember it. So different-yet the same.

I thought I would never see this place again.


© Copyright 2003 Ranea Ratza - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-03-07 10:35 PM


Welcome to this place.  Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (03-07-2003 10:35 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-03-08 02:41 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ranea, this is so very sadly heartfelt, sweet friend, I hope this no longer relates to you and you have found that special place where the birds sing! (sigh) I send angel hugs and my vote your way, sweet friend, it is so great to see you again, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ranea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2003-03-08 03:19 PM


Welcome to Passions and nice to see new faces on the block submitting poems.  Nicely done.

           
R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin  

bestgirl911
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Clio, MI , United We Stand
4 posted 2003-03-08 06:45 PM


Joyce-

I thought I was here alone. Nice to know I'm not.

Angel-

I didn't think anyone would remember me here. Thank you so much for your reply it really brightened my day.

Mysteria-

Actually I am new again-It's been awhile since I've been here- but lots of friends here.

Ranea


kaile
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singapore
5 posted 2003-03-09 06:11 AM


Ranea,

fret not, for i do remember you! you once wrote two incredible (and well-received) poems about the small moments in life so worthy of cherish, didn't you?

nice to see you back, hope you'll stay a while and my "click" is in the box

bestgirl911
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Clio, MI , United We Stand
6 posted 2003-03-09 03:28 PM


Kaile-

Wow! yeah that was me! Fooprints on Our Heart. Thank you so much for your reply. So glad to be remembered.

Ranea

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-03-11 03:30 PM


Enjoyed...James
kaile
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singapore
8 posted 2003-03-12 12:49 PM


hey Ranea, do you know that you can vote for your own poem?

and you're welcome...Footprints on Our Heart? why not a submission to Reflections?

[This message has been edited by kaile (03-12-2003 12:50 PM).]

SPIRIT
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9 posted 2003-03-13 10:42 PM


Happy to cast my vote.
Enchantress
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10 posted 2003-03-13 11:21 PM


Oh yes...one for the book!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Solstice Son
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11 posted 2003-03-14 12:40 PM


smooching all over bestgirl *G*
WhiteRose
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12 posted 2003-03-16 09:07 AM


Very nice, gets my vote
bestgirl911
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13 posted 2003-03-16 07:14 PM


Spirit, Enchantress, White Rose...

Thank you so much for your kind replies.

Sol....

I am so happy to see you back in the Pub...
I can't wait to read on and see the wonderful words that lighten my heart.

Best

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