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Lost Newcomer (...Yet Light Isn't Far Away)

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-03-05 02:54 PM

We failed
...And corrupted
But all
...Are within Your wisdom.

I use to think you're disppointed
Then I think you're just hurt.

Our foolish words
Are sharpen spear
To your heart...

Yet you continue
To open your arms
Longing for...
Our love in You
...and for others.

I am a lost newcomer
Who has lost her faith...

Then...
One day I met a bus driver
Who belonged
To the same church as I do.
He started sharing his experience with God,
And each day on the bus...was
Was a blessing to my heart.

God knows
How to keep in touch with us.

He touches us in his special way,
He...
Comes in all forms,
Appears anywhere.
He...
He blessed me so much that
I...
Even this moment I may not be thankful,
I...
I can dare say there is a God...
Named Jesus.

//hey sorry all, this isn't my finest piece, please bear with me.

~Every girl has a dream within.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (03-05-2003 02:58 PM).]

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-03-05 03:07 PM

aries - you know when you spoke about the bus driver....I remember reading "some have entertained angels without even knowing." This is a very good piece. Keep the faith! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2003-03-05 04:16 PM

This is far better than you think Dear Eliza. Bless your bus driver. Joyce

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-03-06 04:53 PM

Eliza~

'God knows
How to keep in touch with us.'

My AMEN couldn't be any bigger~
This is so touching~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

cupcake
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 116

4 posted 2003-03-07 11:48 AM

Better than you think. Very nice.

I'm a reader - not a writer.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2003-03-07 11:10 PM

Eliza: I thought this was very good! It is so believeable. I often talk to people I meet about my faith, so can imagine you and the bus driver also sharing this conversation.

Betty Lou Hebert

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