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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
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0 posted 2003-03-04 08:25 PM


Forever the river sings,
River tears accompany as shadows.

Forever the river runs,
Crystal clear slowly disappears.

Forever the river lives,
Rich flows become narrow threads.

Forever the song goes on,
Nature echoes the very melody.

Forever the river flows,
Venomous endless enter our heart.

Forever the river reigns,
This mournful song shall be our reminder.

We can't deny
...That sins have corrupted us

We can't deny
...That the world's beauty is lost

Its natural beauty
...Slowly destroyed in our hands

Yet the truth is
...We need to do what to survive

Selfishness
...Needless say is within hearts

Of many
...And who can deny

Ever having sins


Forever the river sings,
River tears accompany as shadows.

Forever the river runs,
Crystal clear slowly disappears.

Forever the river lives,
Rich flows become narrow threads.

Forever the song goes on,
Nature echoes the very melody.

Forever the river flows,
Venomous endless enter our heart.

Forever the river reigns,
This mournful song shall be our reminder.

~Every girl has a dream within.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (03-04-2003 10:34 PM).]

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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2003-03-04 08:53 PM


The river and the song both continuing forever.  Lovely, Aries.  Joyce
Trillium
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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2003-03-05 12:10 PM


Eliza:  Very thought provoking and lovely!

Betty Lou Hebert

SPIRIT
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3 posted 2003-03-05 01:13 PM


Fine post - a thinker for sure.
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