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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Buoys We are like Standing in the middle of the sea, Separated by a line of buoys. We communicate Via the invisible screen. Though we touch, We can't hear the other Clearly under the wind. Under the sunlight I can't see your face. I can't see. I can't hear. We stand here in silence, And I’m guessing your thoughts. Until you ask me how I am, I don’t understand you… Then the rain falls, Pouring… on our backs… We run in different direction, As though… we never mean To be friends. (c)July 11, 2002 Eliza Simmons //my older post...hope u like it...it is true story. ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
All your posts are delightful to read. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I like it, I like it and your English has improved a hundred percent. Don't lose all of your little twisted meanings. Love, Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eliza~ How could I not like it ???? It's soooooooooo real ... so very, very real~ I love the 'buoy' metaphor~ AND .... you BUOY my spirits !  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Eliza: Very clever wording in this one and I like it very much. Glad you posted it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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