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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-02-26 05:29 PM


When the flowers were bright,
You claimed I didn't know love,
So when the autumn came,
And winter went, I took care of them.

Everyday... I added more time
In reminiscence
Of yesterday beauty.

And so time flied by
Another year passed,
My mind is delightful-
In searching for resemblance.

Yet when I go to yonder place,
An unexpected scene blow me away
...Changes has altered
My memories that I once adored.

Maybe your words were wise,
Nevertheless,
Childhood has its own love.

I can't denied
That it was but a dream;
Yet you can't be right,
If you said all there was none.

When the flowers were bright,
You claimed I didn't know love,
So when the autumn came,
And winter went, I took care of them.

Staying...to keep dreams alive.

~Every girl has a dream within.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-02-26 06:58 PM


Just wonderful.  Joyce
SPIRIT
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2 posted 2003-02-26 07:13 PM


Another lovely write - I am so impressed at the gentleness of your posts.
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-02-27 05:04 PM


Enjoyed...one of my favorites...James
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2003-02-28 03:17 PM


Eliza~
You're such a gentle one~
Your words pick me up and carry me to scenes of your making~
Lovely dear ... just lovely~

I thank you for being a poetess !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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cupcake
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5 posted 2003-02-28 08:26 PM


Lovely write, you are always so gentle.

I'm a reader - not a writer.

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