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lorenlynn
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0 posted 2003-02-25 12:51 PM


On this blue marbled place
You gave me life.
I will always know your scent, so sweet
Your touch that comforts
Your warmth, that heals.

If I were blind I would still see you.
A women so beautiful, so graceful when you walk.
So elegantly dressed.

Wherever I travel in my life,
You sit beside me
Hugging me along the way.
When my heart is sad,
You cut roses from your garden,
Make me smile.
When I am hungry, you always provide graciously.


Thank you mother for your education.
For your teaching me to be ,
Who I am.

Your guidance is love ,
A lite path that leads me,
To appreciate you ,
To let you know how much I love you..

Wisdom comes with winters. **  Oscar Wilde.

© Copyright 2003 laurierea - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-02-25 01:48 AM


A lovely tribute to your mother who no doubt is worth every word.  Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (02-25-2003 01:49 AM).]

cupcake
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2 posted 2003-02-25 01:56 AM


This is a lovely tribute for sure.

I'm a reader - not a writer.

SPIRIT
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3 posted 2003-02-25 09:23 AM


Lucky Daughter! Lucky Mother!!

Cause to Celebrate.


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4 posted 2003-02-25 09:45 AM




(smiles) Yay! This is such a gorgeous tribute to your mom, sweet friend, she truly has passed her golden heart onto you as your love always shines across these pages, yay, God Bless You, this has my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2003-02-25 09:52 AM


Very beautiful!
~A hugs and a vote~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Lost Dreamer
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6 posted 2003-02-25 12:34 PM


This is such a precious poem, and a beautiful dedication to your Mom.



Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.


[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (02-25-2003 12:38 PM).]

Sudhir Iyer
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7 posted 2003-02-25 02:21 PM


a very loving tribute...

regards,
sudhir

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8 posted 2003-02-25 06:34 PM


There is no mother that would not want to know what you have said in this lovely poem.

          
~* Carpe' Diem *~  

Poet deVine
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9 posted 2003-02-25 07:43 PM


As a mom, I would be so proud of my child if he/she wrote this for me....your mom is lucky to have YOU too!
Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2003-02-25 09:23 PM


LorenLynn~
I have been negligent in not welcoming you to Passions~
W  E  L  C  O  M  E   !

A lovely, lovely write, so tenderly tendered~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

Nan
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11 posted 2003-02-26 08:20 AM


We should all cherish our mom as you do... Lovely write...
DawnG
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12 posted 2003-02-27 10:54 PM


An absolutely beautiful dedication to mothers everywhere.

                          Dawn

Flower
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13 posted 2003-03-15 12:29 PM


The title got my attention. Really nice post. My mom was the best evr so I know where you are coming from.
WhiteRose
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14 posted 2003-03-16 09:07 AM


A wonderful tribute to motherhood.
suthern
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15 posted 2003-03-20 03:48 PM


A beautiful tribute... a beautiful poem. *S*
Alicethruglass
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16 posted 2003-03-21 11:46 PM


it's wonderful to be able to tell your mom  how you feel..
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