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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-02-24 02:09 PM


Tick-ta, Tick-ta,
Alone in my room
Listening to the...regular beats.

The sky is covered
By the black cloth
Smoothly spreaded
As a roof of the city.

There must be two angels
At each end of the sky
Holding... the cloth
Making waves-
And the waves would be our clouds
Waltzing across in beautiful grace.

Each clouds has different shapes,
Like the variety people in the ball.
But all are imaginative reflection of thoughts.
And being one of them,
I shall not feel alone anymore.

Just when I was in my happiest hour,
A bird awake me in her whisper.
I'm alone
   Again...
In my room.

~Every girl has a dream within.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-02-24 02:16 PM


Eliza~

'There must be two angels
At each end of the sky
Holding... the cloth
Making waves-
And the waves would be our clouds
Waltzing across in beautiful grace.'


MY GOODNESS .... that is just the loveliest thought~
Stunning imagery dear poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SPIRIT
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2 posted 2003-02-24 02:41 PM


Is there no end to your beautiful writes - this is a delight.
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3 posted 2003-02-24 02:57 PM


Eliza:  I love this one!  May be your finest poem yet!  You should have put it in the book.

Betty Lou Hebert

aries_luv_ppl
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4 posted 2003-02-24 06:04 PM


If anyone would like me to include this one for submittion, please reply to this msg with your email address....so I can inform you if I do post it in Reflection forum. Thanks!

~Every girl has a dream within.

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2003-02-24 06:53 PM


Eliza~
Me found it and cast a great big vote !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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aries_luv_ppl
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6 posted 2003-02-24 10:37 PM


thanks all, but I decided to leave it for next run.
cupcake
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7 posted 2003-02-25 12:44 PM


I enjoy reading your very nice posts.

I'm a reader - not a writer.

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Member Rara Avis
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8 posted 2003-02-25 01:35 AM


You are growing better with eah poem.  Joyce
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