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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-02-23 01:35 AM


Big Wave

Chorus:
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Big wave moving onward
To the shore...
  Surprising...
Creating a beautiful cry
In the sea.

As I walk along the beach
I feel no fear...
  Of flood.
It is just the nature sounds...
  Of the sea uniting with the earth.
Rocks absorb light,
  And sea cool them down.

Even crabs need a sun bath,
Moving across the sand,
Showing off their muscles,
Posing their best show.

I hear laugher from the birds,
Whispering something among their ears,
Giggling and chasing
With each other and worry free.
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If...
If we all can be always free like birds,
Then,
Then there won't be so much racing chase.
Birds...
Chase each other, but with harmony.
The world...
Chase each other, but with hurt feelings

Repeat Chorus

Sea...
Sometimes brings solaces to trouble minds.
Sea...
Sometimes are but full of sorrow sentimental.
Sea and birds...
If only...

Chorus

(c)Feb 17,2003
Eliza Simmons

~Every girl has a dream within.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2003-02-23 01:53 AM


Lovely poem aboutthe sea.  Joyce
SPIRIT
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2 posted 2003-02-24 10:21 AM


Another lovely piece from your pen, very nice indeed.
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Member Patricius
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3 posted 2003-02-24 03:09 PM


Eliza:  You are so lucky to live by the sea and obviously, it is a great inspiration to you.  This is beautiful!

Betty Lou Hebert

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