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Yesterday Red Leaves

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-02-22 12:17 PM

Yesterday Red Leaves

Red leaves dance across the air,
Softly caress my cheeks.
Brown leaves break free and retire
To the soil of the earth.

Brown leaves mix with red leaves paint
The blocks with patterns of Mosaic.
All leaves are floating
In the air in celebrating...the new wed.

Autumn touches people in various ways,
To me it reminds me of you.
In yonder autumn, we had our first dance.
In yonder autumn, we shared our goodbyes.

Red leaves were your lovely words,
Softly suduced my trust.
Brown leaves were your solitudes,
Build up a pile of withered hope.

Brown leaves mixed with red leaves
Gave us strains, that slowly pulled me away...
All leaves are falling
In beckoning, that it is all over.

(c)Feb 22, 2003
Eliza Simmons

P.S. I was hoping to tell a story with this one, unfortunately I think I failed, it just didn't come out of my pen.

P.P.S I written a poem to thanks all of you, but the thread is moved to "Reflection..." section it is called "Promenade (a poem for all) "

~Every girl has a dream within.

cupcake
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 116

1 posted 2003-02-22 12:47 PM

I liked this, it did tell a story.

I'm a reader - not a writer.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2003-02-22 01:30 PM

Eliza this is wonderful. One of your best. Love, Joyce

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-02-22 09:05 PM

wonderful write, regardless of how it happened or didn't happen

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2003-02-23 12:29 PM

Eliza: A lovely poem and it does tell a story, so don't be disappointed in it.

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-02-25 09:47 PM

Eliza~
Another 'dancing of the leaves' .... enjoyed it very much~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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