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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time 
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fed amazingly skinny pages my pen does thirst and seeks presence of the thickest parchment to seep and bind the staining silver syllables rain sings into my mouth water bends the mind's performance as in paper of subtle ink blot blot smudge where innovation becomes imagination by a touch of tenuous thumb sordid with traces of quelling beauty and the pen becomes poet's paintbrush favoring the fictitious fallacy found through deduction of elegance in words. For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch, And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.--"Romeo and Juliet" [This message has been edited by IndigoEve (10-12-2003 12:10 AM).] |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
awesome description of your muse ! wow !!! wish i had written this one. i love it. hugs june x |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) "Deduction" simply is no pronoun in the realm of poetry, dearest friend, as elegance and art can never be rushed nor abridged! (big huggggssssss) Love the use of wit and alliteration in here, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
I know the feeling, when I see a blank page I am itching to get started. Enjoyed, Maggie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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