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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-02-21 05:51 PM



Prose In Rhyme
~*Marge Tindal*~

Sometimes I tell the story
of capitulated time …
that falls to the parchment
as prose in rhyme~

It captures a special moment
of my thoughts in word-surrender
Meant to be treated
ever-so-tender~

Intertwined between the lines
of thoughts in slow progress
This little ink-of-think
surely knows me best~

~*~

ca-pit-u-lat-ed
surrendered:
surrendered, especially under specified conditions

Just playing with words on a misty afternoon in Florida


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

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1 posted 2003-02-21 06:40 PM


I've enjoyed the misty day today here. Nice write, as always.
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2 posted 2003-02-21 06:48 PM


Delightful!
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3 posted 2003-02-22 03:41 PM


No one has more fun with words than you,  Joyce
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4 posted 2003-02-22 03:59 PM


all smiles here, my friend...

regards,
sudhir

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5 posted 2003-02-22 05:45 PM


Very sweet Marge - enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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6 posted 2003-02-22 07:30 PM


sweet and love ya,
Vivian

~Every girl has a dream within.

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7 posted 2003-02-22 08:10 PM



You go on playing and I'll sit here and watch

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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8 posted 2003-02-23 01:19 AM


"this little ink of think"-- quite clever.

Thank you very much for the entertaining read.

--Matt

Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think.

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9 posted 2003-02-23 07:48 PM


It's always a treat to read you, Marge! So glad to have you back!
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10 posted 2003-02-24 11:26 AM


Thank you friends of the circle ... you make it a pleasure to share~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

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11 posted 2003-02-24 03:16 PM


Dear Marge:  You are so innovative! everything you write is like a guiding light to me, spurring me on to hopefully, better work.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2003-02-25 09:52 PM


BettyLou~
I don't honestly believe I've ever been paid a higher compliment .... thank you from my heart~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

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