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abbe
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since 2003-01-20
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michigan, usa

0 posted 2003-02-19 10:24 AM


silently she sits
weaving the curls of her hair
softly into braids
catching a wish with
each twist of her fingers
whiling the time away
absently dreaming


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aries_luv_ppl
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Universal Mind
1 posted 2003-02-19 02:37 PM


this is descriptive. I can see the image you painted...and haha...so true about the girl...I know what it is like...LOL

~Every girl has a dream within.

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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
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2 posted 2003-02-19 11:25 PM


Very well drawn picture.  Joyce
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Member Empyrean
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displaced
3 posted 2003-02-20 05:09 AM


very warm and soft
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