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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-02-17 01:55 PM



Soft Spiralameter
~*Marge Tindal*~


~Words, so
very, very softly spoken
these rhymes of poetic convey
found circled within this word spiral
thoughts I gently will attempt to say
wrapping a heart in quiet speak of joy
their intend to be shared with friends
in soft moments of gentlest surrender
quietly-quilted in silent times spent
hovering with the Passions’ poets
Never do I feel alone when
I’m poetically encircled
by friends~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

© Copyright 2003 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-17 02:10 PM


Marge, my sister and friend...I know just what you mean!   and
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2 posted 2003-02-17 03:07 PM


Dear Marge:

Beautiful sentiment, So skillfully displayed and voiced! You are such a treasured part of Passions.

Love
Betty Lou

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3 posted 2003-02-17 07:50 PM


Very lovely, Marge! And there's no better cure for loneliness than to pop in at Passions, I agree!
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4 posted 2003-02-17 09:08 PM


Lovely, marge...and i so agree...Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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5 posted 2003-02-18 12:30 PM


How lovely this is.
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6 posted 2003-02-18 02:04 AM



Marge~
It's so true...you are NEVER alone.
Loving this piece of your heart.
Great big hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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7 posted 2003-02-19 11:40 PM


Your poem is lovely and your friends enjoy.  Love, Joyce
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8 posted 2003-02-20 05:01 AM


damn! that's awesome!
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2003-02-24 11:31 AM


Friends
You know I
thank you all~
Never will I find
a better circle in
which to hang my
poetic thoughts
Huglets
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

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