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lorenlynn
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since 2003-01-27
Posts 203
California Beaches

0 posted 2003-02-11 12:23 PM



I Can Go On

I can go on
Knowing you never cared,
Taking me for granted,
Not giving a damn.

What was it all about
Those nights we had together?

I am leaving,
You lied,
Lead me to believe
You would always be here.

What was it all about
Those nights we had together?

I am leaving,
Leaving for good,
Killing the love
I had for you.

Answer me!
What was it all about
Those nights we had together?

I am leaving,
I can go on!
I know now
That you never cared.


Wisdom comes with winters. **  Oscar Wilde.

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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
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1 posted 2003-02-11 12:34 PM


Just keep on going on and you'll be fine for sure.
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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
2 posted 2003-02-11 01:23 PM


Dear poetess, there really isn't any comfort in knowing why - believe me. Just walk on with your head held high and don't look back. You will be fine. Good write!! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

lorenlynn
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since 2003-01-27
Posts 203
California Beaches
3 posted 2003-02-11 10:00 PM


Believe me, I have gone on to far better things, just proving that I could go on. Thanks for nice comments.

Wisdom comes with winters. **  Oscar Wilde.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-02-21 04:32 AM


yes...go on...and be happy
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