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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Ivory Paper Some people say day raining shower Is a blessing... To me It hides my running tears... Broken out salt of my heart. Some people say night moonlight Is gorgeous... To me It reflects my only shadow... Poisoning...my heart each day deeper... Then I... Come across my table- Sit alone with a ivory paper, which Has tip-toe to my desk to console My thoughts and devastating. My ink spill on the paper, While I seek for someone to be near, Echoing the same sentiments... I need not a pity, nor advice, All I ever need is an attentive ear, Sitting through the night When my heart feels sore... I decide to write to my dear Dairy: Dear Jesus... Today I feel sad... I know you hear me... and you always has patience. So now I will burn all my words to ashes... Leaving them behind... In knowing...You must have Your plan for me... Maybe I am not praying...but I know... You are always listening...to my soul... (c)Dec 30, 2002 Eliza Simmons Maybe I am not praying...but I know... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Eliza - this is quite a sad write, but well done. The Lord has blessed us with a fresh start each morning. Just think how many chances that is to make our lives better! Be well friend and keep writing. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I don't know what makes you so sad Elia, but you have found the right source of solace. Sweetly done. Joyce |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Hope your day is brighter now- sad but nice post. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
thanks all, I have been in this mood for a while, sometimes I am brighter, but I will be fine cuz I have you friends all and my family Maybe I am not praying...but I know... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I would definitely call a cry from the heart praying. I'm sure Jesus would too. This is lovely, Eliza. |
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lorenlynn Member
since 2003-01-27
Posts 203California Beaches |
I am sorry you seem sad, but I am happy to read your great writes. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Eliza: Such a sorrowful write, but still lovely and well done. Hope you will soon feel bright and happy again. Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so sad...but beautiful too |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eliza~ I was struck by this line - 'All I ever need is an attentive ear' Rest assured dear poetess ... as long as you share these thoughts ... you'll have the 'attentive ear' you seek~ Lovely melancholic thoughts~ You pen the truths so delicately~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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CHILI Member
since 2002-09-08
Posts 244 |
Eliza, this was well written and quite sad.  |
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