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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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0 posted 2003-02-08 07:48 PM



THE ARTIST WITHIN

Please,
Oh please - don’t move.
Wonderful!  Thank you,
I want to paint you.
The outline of your form
Fills the canvas of my mind.

You are
The warm glows of pink,
Surrounding me with love.
You are the passionate red,
Arousing my sexual desires
To new and giddying heights,
Of awareness.
You are white,
The white of a purity
And unselfishness,
That is never-ending.

My eyes have never beheld
Such beauty.
Forgive me,
I don’t mean to insult
By calling a man,
Such as yourself,
Beautiful.
But you are beautiful,
From the innermost depth
Of your being.
Your auras’ display such
Kaleidoscopic wonders,
Of immense pleasure and joy,
Causing the artist within me
To create - works of art.
Art that remains
Indelible, in my heart,
On my soul.

I be me BUT who does me be?

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Member Patricius
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just out of reach
1 posted 2003-02-08 07:53 PM


SPIRIT - as always, a pleasure to read. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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2 posted 2003-02-08 07:54 PM


This is lovely. I'm truly enjoying reading you.
lorenlynn
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since 2003-01-27
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California Beaches
3 posted 2003-02-08 11:25 PM


Alright! I like this one as well.
jjote
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since 2002-12-25
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Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2003-02-08 11:53 PM


I like the colors you paint personifying the person you're writing about.
SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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California Desert
5 posted 2003-02-11 10:30 PM


Thank you for the kind words - appreciated very much.
cupcake
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since 2003-01-05
Posts 116

6 posted 2003-02-17 09:13 PM


This appeals into the artist in me - I like it very much.

I'm a reader - not a writer.

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