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lorenlynn
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0 posted 2003-02-02 10:52 AM


Raining Cats and Dogs.

We were going to be together always,
But now you step out of my door
Without a word.
Just your eyes telling me
We are 'we' no more.
There is no more love,
My heart will live alone
As I fade from your life.

I never put off till tomorrow what I can possibly do - the day after.
Oscar Wilde.

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-02-02 11:20 AM


A sad tale. Joyce
SPIRIT
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2 posted 2003-02-02 11:32 AM


Hope this is not a 'reality' write, kinda sad for sure. Interesting!

I be me BUT who does me be?

ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2003-02-02 11:54 AM


sometimes this is a very good thing...make way for better things to come!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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just out of reach
4 posted 2003-02-02 01:07 PM


Everyday is a new beginning. Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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5 posted 2003-02-03 11:58 AM


I was drawn in by the title and though it was not what I expected, I was not dissapointed, this is a really good peice of poetry that I can relate to, thank you for sharing it

Andrew

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lorenlynn
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6 posted 2003-02-08 11:27 PM


I appreciate your comments very much. Thank you.
passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2003-02-21 04:47 AM


sad indeed
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