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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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California Desert

0 posted 2003-01-15 09:15 PM



RECOLLECTIONS

I have committed to memory
Your touch,
Your body and mine,
Fused together
In an unbreakable bond.
This precious closeness,
Is retained
In the recesses of my mind.
How thankful I am,
For the ability
To remember you so clearly.
You remain indelible on my heart,
How sweet the words,
Murmured,
In the throes of passion.
I recall every one,
And the remembering
Causes exquisite pain.

There have been other lovers
Since you,
Undoubtedly,
There will be more,
In my unending search
For a love to replace,
That which I had with you.
If you had left me for another
I could have hated you
And been free,
Instead you were taken in death,
Leaving so many things
Unsaid and undone.
Our relationship
Is like a book,
Half written
By a discouraged writer
Who can see no end in sight.
But how grateful,
Truly grateful I am
For the presence of you,
In my life,
If only for a short,
But memorable time.

I am an enigma, even unto myself.
A puzzle unsolved, a mystery maybe until beyond death.  ©das


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Member Patricius
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just out of reach
1 posted 2003-01-15 09:57 PM


Oh, how heartfelt this is. Lovely. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Barbara Trautman
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2 posted 2003-01-15 11:26 PM


Don't know if this is "truth, lies (or) imagination" but it is soooo beautiful.  It makes me sad even if it isn't true and if it is, I hurt for you.  B.
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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2003-01-15 11:32 PM


I too lost my very first true love to death.  I have always thought bad as it is it is better for me than betrayal would have been.  At least I kept the sweetness of remembrance.   Joyce
lorenlynn
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since 2003-01-27
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4 posted 2003-02-08 11:17 PM


Just great, love it.
passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-02-21 04:48 AM


wonderful!
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