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Esmeralda Ponsonby
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0 posted 2003-01-15 12:51 PM


A Warming Thought

Candle in thine window
Frost glimpsing at thy flame
Determined wick aglow
Flickering chill away.

© Copyright 2003 Esmeralda Ponsonby - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-15 02:11 PM


Yes indeed, this is a warming thought. It is frigid here in Ontario, Canada to-day!! Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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2 posted 2003-01-15 02:52 PM


Esmeralda, what a lovely name.  A poem all by itself.  I can see your thought candle burning  away fighting the frost that would devour it.  A continuous war.  Lovely, Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (01-15-2003 03:12 PM).]

midnightblues
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3 posted 2003-01-15 03:27 PM


Dear Esmeralda,

I really enjoyed your laconic piece

Love
Michelle

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NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2003-01-15 07:44 PM


Esmeralda, I'll be right there to sit by the candle and warm up.  

Hugs, Marti

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with our music still inside of us.

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5 posted 2003-01-15 08:06 PM


A warming thought, indeed! So nice to see you and read you again, Esmeralda!
DawnG
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6 posted 2003-01-18 12:09 PM


Esmeralda,

Did the candle help warm you up?

                                  Dawn

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7 posted 2003-01-18 04:22 AM


Delightful! You can 'see' the frost on the one side of the window with the candle flickering away on the other side. Nicely said.
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