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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2003-01-09 05:39 PM


Does she see the streaming shapes
forming fast against the wind?

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1 posted 2003-01-09 07:11 PM


Who would think so few words could conjure up such images in the readers mind?!! Awesome Mikey. Chris

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that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2003-01-10 11:56 AM


Thanks, Chris.
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3 posted 2003-01-10 12:43 PM


Wow Michael...

i'm impressed how didya do that?

Michelle

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