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akira
Member

since 2002-07-13

Posts 79
Idaho

0 posted 2003-01-08 05:18 PM

There is something about you that i cant explain
Something about the way you touch me, about the way you look at me

Do you know how long i've wanted a love like this
Do you know how long its been since i've trusted a man

I was so alone in this world
So lost and cold

You came into my life and turned my world upside down
Everything i believed about men you proved wrong

I had been hurt in the past
You showed me a world with no hurt

I fell in love with you and i've never regreted it
I lost my heart to you and every moment of every day
My heart pounds with love for you

Can you explain why it was you who could change the way i see things?
Can you explain what it was you did to my heart?

Whatever it was that you did to make my world whole
Thank you
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written by akira
copyright 2002

Akira
www.poetrypoems.com/akira
http://briefcase.yahoo.com/karianna_destiny
Akiras_Fire@hotmail.com

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2003-01-08 05:25 PM

Congratulations if you have found a love so true. Joyce

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-01-08 06:18 PM

akira - Wow, I think you should keep him!! Enjoyed this. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

akira
Member

since 2002-07-13

Posts 79
Idaho

3 posted 2003-01-09 03:28 PM

i have decided to keep him...LOL i married him
if you'd like to see our wedding pics
http://briefcase.yahoo.com/karianna_Destiny

Akira
www.poetrypoems.com/akira
http://briefcase.yahoo.com/karianna_destiny
Akiras_Fire@hotmail.com

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

4 posted 2003-01-09 10:45 PM

Nice wedding pictures. Loved the Precious Moments cake, looked really yummy. Congratulations! Happy days every day.

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

5 posted 2003-01-10 02:23 AM

What a loving poem

(I like your photos too - your wedding looked very beautiful!!)

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

6 posted 2003-01-10 05:33 PM

I hope someday I won't be disguest by guys too. Right now I think: Guys don't worth time spending...They are jerks!

I'm happy for you. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

7 posted 2003-01-10 06:38 PM

Hey your not the only one to have a guy 2 prove your wrong

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

8 posted 2003-01-11 03:52 PM

Wow Felicity you're so lucky, and you really have a way of expressing yourself!

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

9 posted 2003-01-11 05:19 PM

Congratulations to you and Matt, Akira! Lovely poem, lovely photos!

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