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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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0 posted 2003-01-07 08:41 PM



Soaring

See how high
My spirits soar,
Look at the joy
Mirrored,
In my eyes.
You say
You see naught,
But your image,
Reflected
In my eyes.
Then fully,
You see my joy.
For,
It is you,
And only you,
Who set my spirits
Soaring.

I am an enigma, even unto myself.
A puzzle unsolved, a mystery maybe until beyond death.  ©das


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1 posted 2003-01-07 08:44 PM


Oh, this is lovely and I really like the form. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

aries_luv_ppl
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2 posted 2003-01-07 08:56 PM


nice

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.
~my fragile heart is yearning for help, w

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3 posted 2003-01-08 01:00 PM


this is really a lovely and cheering little verse.  Joyce
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4 posted 2003-01-08 02:13 PM


SPIRIT:  This is charming and tender.  I really enjoyed it.

Betty Lou Hebert

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