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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-01-07 03:59 PM

(music tranquilly)
Sometimes I tremble
On the surface of
The revealing water.

Sometimes I wonder...
The image I see-
Is she capable
Of carrying on
The bag on her back...

She seems to be scared
Of herself by now-
(music slow)
What would she does that
That would save her from
Being in her comefortable zone...

(music tranquilly)
Sometimes I tremble
On the surface of
The revealing water.
(Speaker)
But...who can help me, if not me?

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (01-07-2003 08:19 PM).]

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-01-07 06:47 PM

Interesting. Not quite sure of what you are trying to say. Could it be all the excess baggage this person is carrying, frightens her? Hmmmmm. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

2 posted 2003-01-07 08:15 PM

oh just how often I say I can't do it or afraid to do it and take new responsiblity... afraid to grow up and so forth...

my fragile heart is yearning for help,
but who can help me, if not me?

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2003-01-07 08:23 PM

Oh, Yes, I see now. Well, as Aerosmith sings..."life's a journey,not a destination." Growing up isn't so scarey. lol. You'll do just fine. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

4 posted 2003-01-07 09:46 PM

Interesting!!!!!!

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2003-01-08 01:04 PM

Remember my piece "Words Betray"? These are the words I was talking about. Questioning and looking towards the future to me means the author is young. Your poetry is always lovely. Joyce

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