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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

0 posted 2003-01-06 08:27 PM

DOUBLE D

Sweetness,
That is soured.
Honeyed,
It trickles
From the lips,
In sarcastic,
Yet melodic tones.
It gives vent
To hidden sores,
That in bitterness
Have never healed.
Because of the
Senseless
Folly of one,
And the
Unforgiving nature
Of the other, pain
Has become a fence
Between the
“Sorry”
Of the ‘menopausal’ male,
And
“The damn you all to Hell”
Of the unbending,
Highly offended female.
Another marriage killed
By the two Ds’.

DISHONESTY and DISCONTENT

I am an enigma, even unto myself.
A puzzle unsolved, a mystery maybe until beyond death. ©das

© Copyright 2003 das - All Rights Reserved

Denise

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Posts 22648

1 posted 2003-01-06 08:32 PM

So very sad, SPIRIT. Very well expressed.

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Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-01-06 09:09 PM

SPIRIT - this poem will hit home with many I am sure....it did with me. Well done. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

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Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2003-01-07 02:07 AM

Very sad and very well said. Joyce

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

4 posted 2003-01-09 02:05 AM

Thank you one and all, appreciate.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-09-14 01:34 PM

sad

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

6 posted 2004-11-04 01:01 AM

Spirit,

This is sad indeed! Very well written!

Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

7 posted 2004-11-15 12:51 PM

Very sad and very well written.

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