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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2003-01-04 08:05 AM


A hush upon a Winters dawn
as silence deep and quiet still
invades the corners of the earth
and settles in the mind and heart
beating ever softly with
the gentle fall of snow
covering the winters chill
and branches bare of promised Springs
gentle song of births renewed
hope that ever sings the joy
found in the heart this quiet morn
of deepened silent snows remind
to still the thoughts and ponder thus
Gods ever present promised truth
in the still small voice of His
heard in silent Winters dawn.

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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1 posted 2003-01-04 09:36 AM


Very soft and gentle words, like the snow falling outside my window. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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2 posted 2003-01-04 11:05 AM


Beautiful Ellie.  It is always nice to rad you.  Joyce
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3 posted 2003-01-04 06:54 PM


ellie:  Very lovely!  Early morning is a time when it seems you can almost see God watching you!

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2003-01-05 07:39 PM


Oh this was lovely
A delightful read
Thanks for this soothing one today
Susan~~~~

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5 posted 2003-01-06 04:42 AM


Hey Ellie,

this might be a very subtle song, perfect for Christmas!

Love
Michelle

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Denise
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6 posted 2003-01-06 08:38 PM


Beautiful as always, Ellie!
cupcake
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7 posted 2003-02-12 10:01 PM


You write so beautifully.

I'm a reader - not a writer.

abbe
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8 posted 2003-02-13 04:06 PM


good write... especially liked this

"branches bare of promised Springs
gentle song of births renewed"

wish i'd said that...

but spring will come... it will!

thanks

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9 posted 2003-02-20 01:03 PM


very soft and relaxing
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10 posted 2003-03-20 02:32 PM


Ellie~
Bumped for the sheer beauty of it all~
I'm glad I flipped back a few pages for this lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2003-03-20 07:01 PM


Ellie-

You always paint such a beautiful picture in my minds eye.....

Ranea

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